Thursday 25 July 2013

Very Amazing Essay Writing Tips (Part 1)


Essay writing should be a simple and fun process. Get some suggestions for effective essay writing.

This is the first part of a two part series on very amazing essay writing tips. Make sure you check the second part in a day’s time.

Very Amazing Essay Writing Tips (Part 1)

Is writing an essay a trial and error process? Absolutely not, but writing an essay can be frustrating, maddening process—though it does not have to be. Granted, writing an essay is supposed to be easy and even fun.
Brief overview of the very amazing essay writing tips

1)      Read through the question(s)
Providing a different answer to the question is a common mistake made by students.  Unfortunately, this is the main cause of a disappointing exam result. Answering the wrong question is like setting out on a journey but taking the wrong direction; it can be real disaster, right? You should, therefore, make sure you understand what the examiner wants.
Read through the questions, underline the key word and phrases, and identify the task words that tell what needs to be done, e.g ‘compare’, ‘contrast’, ‘discuss’ etc. Identify the topic words such as, ‘causes’, effects’, ‘benefits’ etc. These topic words, in most cases, indicate the particular subject of the essay. Remember also to identify limiting words such as, ‘Benefits of globalisation as shown in chapters 1 – 3’

2)      Research
Now that you have understood the question, begin the essay writing process by researching your topic. Make use of the academic databases, Internet, and the library and make yourself an expert. Make the research process more effective and easier by breaking the essay topic down into a series of research questions.
Remember to take notes and take note of the sources; as a matter of fact, the research questions you wrote would direct your reading and organise your note taking. While researching, be selective; that is, use only relevant and credible sources.

3)      Brainstorm ideas in response to the question
As you research and analyse the arguments of the essay you are reading, make note of any quotes or relevant evidence that come to mind. A great essay will require your own ideas; ask yourself questions and answer them. This is what is called genuine essay writing brilliance—coming up with original insights to write about.
The information you collect—data and ideas—adds flesh to the bones of your argument: it forms the back up of your points. So you should ensure the information you are gathering is credible, solid and can be supported with facts (not myths).

4)      Develop a thesis
A thesis is an idea or argument that encapsulates the response to the question; simply put, it’s a statement that expresses the overall response to the question. Do not write a thesis that is too simplistic. This shows that thought has been put behind the question. As such, it forms the backbone of the essay. But how do you write a good thesis? Simple, pick your best idea and write a clear statement that you can write your entire essay is around.

That’s all for today, be sure to check the second part—coming soon. The second part includes the outline, introduction, paragraphs and conclusion. In addition, we will cover how to write the body of the essay and discuss the stylistic aspect of it. There are much more, so do not miss out.
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Wednesday 24 July 2013

Very Amazing Essay Writing Tips (Part 2)

This is the second and final part of our series, very amazing essay writing tips. In this series, we are discussing how to develop professional essays that will surely score a high grade. If you have not read the first part of this wonderful series, you are missing in action. Here is the link; read the first part and you’ll qualify to co-star with me as we develop professional essays from scratch.

A brief recap of what we have already covered
We talked about reading through the questions, underlining keywords, listings and directive words such as evaluate, discuss , criticize etc. This, as we discussed, helps us know what exactly our instructor wants.  In essence, it helps us answer questions the way we are supposed. We also talked about developing a thesis statement.  We defined thesis as a statement that expresses the overall response to the question. It should not be very simplistic so as to show that a solid thought had been put behind its development; in any case, it forms the backbone of the essay.

So now we look at essay outline.

Outline the answer before writing
Let’s face it; we love clarity, we love something that seems well organized. So does your teacher. The writing process should be easy and straight forward and writing an outline helps us achieve that. Jumping into the writing ‘bus’ without adequate preparation and hoping the journey to quality essays will be smooth turns us to be a dead dream. In fact, the journey will prove futile and time consuming. Here is my point: write a logical outline upon which your essay will flow. This helps you present your essay in a professional manner; after all, we are writing professional essays.

So how do you write an outline?
Use brief sentences to describe your paragraphs and bullet points to describe the contents of your paragraph. The ideas should be arranged in a logical sequence and should be relevant to the question. You don’t want to finish writing the essay only to discover you have not answered the question. A clear outline defines the direction your essay will take.

Take time to write an introduction
The introduction should grab the reader’s attention. It consist the main points to be made—simply call it a buildup of the issue—and should lead into your thesis. An attention grabbing introduction could start with startling information, which is true and verified of course. This may be a pertinent fact that helps illustrate your point and, in most cases, requires a brief elaboration.
You could also start your intro an anecdote, a story that illustrates your point, but ensure it is short, clear and relates to your essay.

Writing paragraphs
Each paragraph should expound a certain idea, contained in the outline,  in a concise manner. In addition, the idea should be supported with explanation and evidence. The paragraphs should have a flowing rhythm; that is, transition from one paragraph to the other should be smooth. In case you are writing a procedural essay, ensure the paragraphs are arranged such that they correctly follow the steps in the procedure.

Take time to write a conclusion
A conclusion is a neat bundle briefly explaining, in a satisfactory manner, the beginning and ending of your essay. It brings a closure to the reader, and may provide a final perspective—your feelings about the topic—on the points you raised in your essay.

Proofread and proofread
When writing, we tend to misspell words, omit parts or words, or omit parts of question. Also, we may misstate dates and figures; writing $0.60 instead of $60, or 7/21/1999 instead of 7/21/1989.
Reread your essay and answer the following questions.

·         Are the sentences flowing smoothly from one another? If not, adding some transition words like “therefore” and “however” might prove helpful.
·         Is your essay making logical sense?

Run a spell checker or a grammar checker to help catch errors that you could have missed—however, the practice is not 100% effective. Also, a friend might help catch the errors.

Rereading also helps us to qualify answers when in doubt. For example, saying “In 1894, the government decided to blah blah” when you are not sure whether the year in question was 1894 or 1884 may not be helpful. Your teacher may have the actual year and you can get a deduction in your essay marks due to lying. You can go around the statement by writing “Towards the end of the 19th century, the government decided to blah blah.”

Once you have finished checking your working and formatting correctly, your essay is ready for forwarding to the teacher.

Congratulations! You have successfully finished the basic essay writing course. If you found it useful, please spare a minute and comment; I will highly appreciate.

Friday 28 June 2013

The Grove: All You Need To Know

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The Grove
Introduction 
It is located in Los Angeles and constitutes the ultimate shopping and entertainment destination for the people around its vicinity. More than just a traditional enclosed regional mall it contains some defining elements of a Life Style. This is characterized by the presence of loyalty reward program which is a guest service to entertainment purchases and shopping through earned points by simply showing the receipts. Ample parking, gift cards, kid’s club calendar of events and a movie theater also explain the same thing. This is an indication of a way of life since it caters for the need of every one and more all areas including shopping dining and entertainment. A regional center deviating from the traditional is due emergence of technological advancement which includes: movie theater and loyalty reward program that did not exist in the past.
It covers an area of 20 acres next to the historic Farmers market. This translates to about 575,000-square-foot and offers two valet parking and two self parking places. Moreover; it offers free parking hours to the guest. It has storefronts and cafés around a central Town Square area and a fountain of dancing waters. The presence of good access roads, restrooms, automated teller machines are appealing to the customers.
The Groove and its tenants responded appropriately to the challenge of maximizing density on an infill site upon building a multi storey retail space and getting customers and tenants utilize the upper floors by upgrading all the lights around the area. They also added a new street to enhance easy access to the upper floors. There has been successive growth in the assets of the company as well as established expansion. Through this it has attracted many customers and we realize that parking space is a problem due to the high population that’s visits the place.

The developer ensured the presence of the best latest movies and a general combination of the various types of movies to attract many people with different tastes. Caruso Affiliates would ensure cost-competitive financing to ensure that all new opportunities are taken advantage of in the market. He could ensure conservative financing and develop it into a real estate. He would improve it into a high quality environment where the people around spend time, dine and take care of their shopping. He would turn the Groove to generating high grossing sales and making it to emerge the best and one of the most respected country’s retailers.
The customers spend around 750 US dollars per square foot which approximately double the average of the industry. Due to the good management, Caruso has managed to achieve a revenue growth of about 23 percent every year. This is a very impressive move to be achieved in just one year. The sales per square foot reflected a value of about 75 percent beyond the industry average. The result of this impressive achievement is that the company plans to invest one billion US dollars in the next ten years.
Typical lease terms
Caruso began his career in real estate’s by buying land near airports and leased it to rental companies of cars. He then engaged in developing of industrial properties just before involving himself in the retail sector. The groove earns a lot of income from leasing the property annually and that has led to the overall growth and improvement.

Approximate Square Footage of the Grove
It covers an area of 575,000-square-foot which blends a mix of entertainment and shopping. This area provides a wonderful environment where many people go to do their shopping and also enjoy their time resting. It has served many issues as different people go there for enjoyment while others shopping. It was opened in 2002 and won the Retail Traffic Superior Achievement.
Cost of developing the Groove
It is a contract that demanded a lot of resources to foster its implementation. Caruso is an expert in that field of investing in real estates and hence he managed to control all costs. This led to a bit reduced cost. It has a normal expenditure of about 126 US dollars per day and makes sales of about 75% above industry average
A typically acceptable ratio of occupancy costs to restaurant sales should be in a way that the sales realized from sales should be greater than the company costs which generally include rent, tax to the government and more importantly common area maintenance. These are the most vital costs that must be met to sustain comprehensive business operation.
The acceptable ratio of occupancy costs to restaurant sales should be in a way that the sales realized from the restaurant should cater for all the expenses of the restaurant at all cost which include both fixed and variable. It should yield enough to meet expenses such as rent and still earn sufficient profit to the owner. This will sustain the presence of the restaurant for a long period of time without collapsing.
Other additional sources of income in apart from the tenant store leases may include fee charged for parking services. This earns the company a lot of income since there is many people visiting the area. Other forms would include money realized from child club that are frequently held. Due to the great number of people visiting this area they earn good money. The acquisition vehicle that Caruso Affiliated used in acquiring the land to build the Groove was a trolley that was built from a historic Boston street car. This is a market where one can do as sufficient shopping without much struggle since there are a wide variety of commodities that meet the large number of people who visit the area. There is presence of fast foods that local farmers have raised themselves as depicted in Los Angeles.
Gilmores family the owners of the land next to the farmers market made a great contribution by influencing the design of the farmers market. They worked hard to ensure that its design did not have a negative effect to the market so that it would attract more customers. One of the major contributions of the farmers market was that it acted like a food court that the groove did not have. The farmers market has become a land mark due to the fact that the groove does not have a food court other than a few snack stations. It has greatly worked on this drawback of the groove and hence acquiring the large market for fast foods.
 The design of the farmer’s market make it a unique local icon as this leads to the attraction a large number of people who come to take care of their shopping there. Also it bears an advantage due to its location next to the groove where many people visits it gets adequate customers.
Improvement on the physical layout should be made day after day to emerge with very good design so that it can attract more and more customers.
Creation of more streets and upgrading of all the traffic lights in the area would be a good recommendation in improving the access to the market. For tenant mix the farmers need to understand who are their customers, their location, age, income, and ethnicity and finally identify the one who will take up the challenge of anchor tenants.

Works Cited
Caruso Affiliated, accessed on 19 April 2011, http://www.carusoaffiliated.com/
Farmers market, accessed on 19 April 2011,http://www.farmersmarketla.com/
 Hamlin, David and   Arena, Brett, Los Angeles's Original Farmers Market, Arcadia Publishing, 2009, pg 67-90

The Grove, accessed on 19 April 2011, http://www.thegrovela.com/

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